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Blue Raine
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PostSubject: Golden Bells   Thu Mar 29, 2007 6:11 am

Golden Bells

If you are sad and lonely,
He is there to comfort you.
When you are both together,
There is love between you two.

When you walk hand in hand,
There are no troubles in the air.
When you are beside the other,
You make love without a care.

In the morning, when you wake,
The sun shines down the golden beams.
You pinch yourself so constantly,
To make sure he is not a dream.

Now you walk the aisle alone,
Where he is waiting at the end.
Golden bells are ringing after.
Marriage is right around the bend.

Happily Ever After.

~Raine
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Bells   Wed Apr 04, 2007 11:55 pm

lol are you a loner? no offense but yea...
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Bells   Thu Apr 05, 2007 4:07 am

nope! i just really like poetry, this was actually a poem gift to a friend of mine is australia. couldn't get her anything real, so i opted for a poem about both her and her boyfriend. i thought it turned out okay...
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Bells   Thu Apr 05, 2007 4:44 am

Whoa yo you didn't tell me you had a friend in australia.... Its a pretty nice poem and kinda represents you haha(if you get meh).

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PostSubject: Re: Golden Bells   Wed Apr 25, 2007 3:41 am

not bad raine.
youre pretty good at expressing feelings or however you made that poem it was quite good. make more!
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Bells   Sat May 05, 2007 6:42 pm

Yea post more of you poems man they're not bad.
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PostSubject: Re: Golden Bells   Wed May 09, 2007 5:36 am

^_^ ehehe. thanks. i have quite a lot... but most of em are from my old days. and those are free verses full of SUCK. i just really need to wait around for that muse to whack me in the head with it's hammer of ideas, ya know?
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